What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?
Today's world is full of new technologies and these innovations has turn the world upside down. Among those innovations antibiotics, computers and airplanes play important roles. However, i strongly believe that computer technology is the best invention so far and here i'm going to discuss my opinions on this matter.
To begin with, there are numerous advantages of computers. Nowadays almost all the fields are computerized including education, bank systems, medical technology and even paying bills also. For example, now we don't have to stand in long queues in banks, even we don't want go to bank also. We can stay in home and just do our banking by simply using computers. On the other hand, using computers improve the efficiency of any organization significantly and it also reduces the number of file work and documentations. If we consider about education field, students can do their studies more effectively by using computers. They don't want spend hours and hours in libraries to search relevant books as internet facilities make their work much easier. On the other hand, instead of keeping hand written books which can be damaged within few years, students can store more lessons in their computers even with power point or excel versions.
Overall computer technology makes human life more comfortable with lots of easy accesses. Sometimes people don't want to even think as computers do that on behalf people. Hence, based on above mentioned factors i think that computers are the most important invention for past few decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, for example, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17529880478 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70854809044 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1383738838 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7857142857 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175407358623 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632600009693 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851987707435 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146992747324 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100558867063 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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