Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award.
Who is this person
Why did you choose him?
What is the characteristic of a good employee?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to nominate Saad for the best employee of the year award. To elucidate Saad a Pre-sales consultant with the business solutions group who provides techno-commercial support to the sales team.
Although there are many reasons for choosing him however the most pivotal one being the quality of proposals being prepared by him for the customers. Additionally, he has also played a key role in helping the sales team to close some large scale projects which wouldn't have been possible without his sound knowledge about competing products. Lastly, I have got positive feedback from customers who are satisfied with his support for any technical issues on their network, therefore, some customers have also written him appreciation emails.
In my opinion, a good employee should have good characteristics like patience, persistence, good listening skills and being punctual. These qualities not only make a person successful in their endeavour but also enable them to provide a valuable contributor to the company's growth.
I look forward to your response and hope that you accept my recommendation.
Yours sincerely
Ata
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...ble contributor to the companys growth. I look forward to your response and hope...
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...ept my recommendation. Yours sincerely Ata
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, lastly, look, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39130434783 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95450298726 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.722826086957 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8518783069 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277010505401 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102156004015 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110642245633 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139829846978 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706045331945 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 70.7449484536 60% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.