There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? (RE-WRITE)
Based on findings from the paleolithic age to the course of the 20th century, music has been characterized by rhythms, styles and sounds. Again, the rise of music population, meaning those who are grouped into AllMusic, with an online music guide service website, established in 1991 has been a great melting pot. Presently, there are roughly twenty three types of music out there. While the most popular ones – light jazz, classical, rock and contemporary styles – have been campaigned for international music, some people preserve traditional music for strong traditions. Indeed, by adding impr...
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Thanks, Mr. testbig. Anyway,
Thanks, Mr. testbig. Anyway, if I add some information/content related to the importance of both traditional rather than that of international music in my essay above, will you re-mark my essay? Thanks in advance.
Mr. testbig. I’ve added some
Mr. testbig. I’ve added some content related to traditional and international music. I look forward to hearing from you, sir. Thanks.
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Big Thanks to you, Mr.
Big Thanks to you, Mr. testbig
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