Is it a good idea for teenagers to have a part time job. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a phenomenon upsurge in the number of students who take part in part - time job. Much as it is often argued that it is unessential and can affect teenagers negatively, I wholeheartedly believe that students ought to have a part-time job.
To commence with, there is no denying that students themselves are able to reap a lot of benefits from doing part - time job. It is considered as an efficacious way to face up to financial problems. Working part time makes it possible for students to help diminish the burden on their parents. As a result, it is more likely for them to continue their studying along with pursue their own interests such as shopping, traveling, etc. Apart from that, part -time job can exert a profound impact on the development of adolescents. They will find it possible to find a job commensurate with their talents or their hobby, which is likely to help them have a more potential career prospects. Last but not least, part – time job is highly recommended for teenagers with the aim of enhancing their skills. Youngsters should utilize the chance of doing part – time job to develop some perquisite skills for future job such as communication, problem solving, or time management.
Another noteworthy point is that it is apparent that part - time jobs also can have positive effect on the society. In all likelihood, that a new generation has a good command of skills and disciplinary knowledge is able to provide a highly qualified workforce for the future. This definitely can enhance individuals’ living standard significantly and motivate the socio- economic development of the nation.
To sum up, I strongly argue that students should spend time on engaging in part - time job as long as they can arrange a reasonable timetable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... face up to financial problems. Working part time makes it possible for students to help ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9634551495 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9329403693 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554817275748 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.776762167 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324352954093 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124331112857 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765255302586 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197510163763 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580053872656 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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