Some think that people are responsible for a solution to pollution made by transportation and others think that government are responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The pollution has been tremendously raised due to large number of vehicles on the road. Some people consider that it is responsibility of citizens to curb the pollution caused from the growing traffic, however other think that it is the obligation of state to combat this problem. In my opinion, with the collaborative efforts of government and individuals, we would be able to minimize the pollution.
On the one hand, it is asserted that people should come up with initiatives to mitigate the effects of pollution contributed by automobiles. The mainstay to this belief is that public should cut off using the vehicles which are emitting harmful pollutants such as carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide in the environment. Furthermore, the pollution level would decrease, if more people use electric vehicle or hybrid electric vehicles rather than using old conventional vehicles. In addition, people should grow more trees and plant because these absorb pollutants which are emitted from transports.
One the other hand, it is advocated that state should devise strategies to attain the reduced levels of pollution. Firstly, government bodies should formulate vehicle emission standard and impose ban on the vehicle which are not meeting these standards. To illustrate, it has been found from a survey report conducted by environmentalist that countries which implement and followed the vehicle emission standard were able to reduce pollution to great extent. Lastly, government should run frequent awareness campaigns among masses about conservation of environment by growing trees and plants.
To conclude, pollution related to transport has become a grave concern for countries. In my opinion, we could control the levels of pollution with the equal contributions from government and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53790613718 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9711037807 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3861203693 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180613000524 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658732860183 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052801071569 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124116540385 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062896308463 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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