You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain the important event
• apologise for the situation
• suggest a new arrangement
Dear Derrick,
Hope you are doing well. I would like to inform about the postponement of my trip to London from 15 July to 1st August due to an important event at home. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate my cousin Jenny is getting married and we didn’t know about it until the last minute. As you know that she is of our age group thus holds a special place in my heart from childhood days. The marriage function will last about a week from 15th July to 27th of July. Although I was planning to skip the marriage event however I have been given additional responsibilities for making arrangement during the marriage function. Additionally, I would like to apologize for the trouble I have caused you since you had made arrangement for my stay at your home moreover you had made some prior booking to some tourist attractions spots.
Lastly, I plan to visit London in the 1st week of August as the weather is pleasant. Additionally, Terry will also accompany me on this time so I guess it is a great opportunity for you to know her.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
With love
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...;t know about it until the last minute. As you know that she is of our age group t...
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Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to seeing you soon. With love Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, look, moreover, so, thus, well, i guess, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56783919598 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63876040755 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5160526818 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204055747091 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590983306644 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502969005412 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115638698408 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406016187441 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.