People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter,
• Describe the problem.
• Explain how that is affecting people.
• Say what the company should do to help.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about some technical problems with the internet connection. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I am using a 1 Gbps internet connection from the past 6 months which provide unlimited download with no capping. Although the internet connection has been working satisfactorily in the past however from the last few weeks the connection is intermittent. additionally, the internet speed is very slow which makes the browsing experience worse. Furthermore, it makes our lives miserable as most of the people living in the apartment are students therefore use the internet to do university assignment and research work at night.
Lastly, I have spoken to your customer support representatives who assured me for a resolution within 24 hours however a week has passed and still the issue persists. Hence I request your company to provide an immediate resolution, additionally, I also need you to provide a discount voucher which can be applied on the next billing cycle as compensation for problems with the internet service.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely
said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about some te...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...w weeks the connection is intermittent. additionally, the internet speed is very slow which ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...as passed and still the issue persists. Hence I request your company to provide an im...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce. Looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely said
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to your response. Yours sincerely said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, lastly, look, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27222222222 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0468107187 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9328768245 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261251579026 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900664211119 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570085791781 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142693070795 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516023602424 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.