Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Some museums stipulate a fixed fee for entrance, while others are free of charge. Despite the fact that some people would be deprived of using these facilities because they cannot afford to pay the fees, this development would contribute to generating income for keeping museums operate. Therefore, I believe that the benefits that can be yielded from imposing fees outweigh the drawbacks.
The primary drawback that may result from charging people for entering these buildings is the fact that some would not be able to afford to pay the imposed fee. Some categories of society, such as unemployed people and students, would not have access to frequent museums because they do not have a constant source of income. This would, therefore, deprive people of enjoying arts and learning about ancient cultures and customs. In Paris, for instance, tourists and locals are more familiar with all crafts and paintings in Louvre museum because people can freely visit it without paying a single penny.
On the other hand, imposing charges per entrance would generate profits that can be used in turn in upgrading museum equipment and maintaining hem operate. Not only is it beneficial to museums as facilities that need to be managed, but also for people because they would be able to appreciate art and history when they are paying for its usage. For example, the Guardian Newspaper has reported lately that the fees that imposing a symbolic fee in the UK for art facilities usage are meant to upgrade these amenities and renovate them.
In conclusion, I believe that generally the imposed fees for using these buildings are usually symbolic and anyone can afford to pay them. Also, the revenue yielded from charging customers would be used in paying museums' staff. Thus, the advantages of this policy far outweigh any demerit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rade these amenities and renovate them. In conclusion, I believe that generally ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08970099668 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4552056962 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528239202658 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1875774939 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258050966265 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105208240749 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575685216273 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179567452519 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199304614259 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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