Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
While some would opt to live in private houses, others, however, believe that living in a flat is more beneficial in many aspects. This essay believes that living in a private house offers a higher degree of comfort and privacy. Also, provides a safe environment for bringing up children.
The primary advantage associated with living in a house is the fact that these kind of homes provide a higher quality of comfort and prosperity. Unlike living in a tiny apartment with neighbors who might be a source of constant disturbance and noise, houses offer greater privacy and the roomy spaces positively impact people health. For instance, a study that was conducted by Yale University in 2015 showed that people who live in residential buildings together are five times more likely to have stress-related diseases than those who live in private houses.
As well as that, raising a child in a house puts him or her a step forward to become successful in the long term. This is because houses enable children to grow safely with closer parental surveillance. However, those who grow up in multi-story residential buildings most often get influenced by their neighbor peers, such as picking bad habits of smoking or even get involved in minor crimes. Therefore, this category of people is extremely vulnerable and may go off track if they do not get the required parental surveillance. For example, a study conducted by Sao Paulo University in Brazil showed that more than 70% of juvenile delinquents were living in flats.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that houses have greater benefits than drawbacks as compared to living in an apartment because houses offer a safer environment for young people to grow in and also the comfort factor and privacy may deeply affect people’s lives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...with living in a house is the fact that these kind of homes provide a higher quality of co...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cy may deeply affect people's lives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05723905724 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74321730611 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.241387028 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367764763378 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12486510653 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100358701018 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234227511765 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791533490853 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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