In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.
What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?
Traffic congestion has become a serious problem in many parts of the world nowadays. The truth is that traffic is caused by multiple factors; one of them is the lack of mass transit options. Despite this, government can tackle this issue which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
The high volume of cars and trucks on the road has undoubtedly created a major problem in various cities worldwide. This problem arises because people tend to use their private vehicles when there is limited options on the public transportation. Moreover, this is worsened because mass transit generally covers limited area in the city, thus, commuters find it difficult to go to certain places by using public transport. As a result, people often find it cheaper and faster to reach their workplaces by using their own cars compared to, for example, taking interconnected buses.
This issue, fortunately, could be tackled easily if people are convinced to leave their cars at home. In order to do this, government needs to improve the public transport system by building more Mass Rapid Transit (MRT) facilities that cover wider areas in the city. Likewise, the road transport can be improved by increasing the number of buses and extending their network line to places which are not covered by MRT. If public are convinced that travelling by public facilities are cheaper and faster, therefore, they are most likely to change their preference methods on commuting.
To sum up, the fundamental cause of traffic problem lies on the limited options of public transportation, therefore, it is of utmost importance to provide general public with a good access to mass transit facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
..., it is of utmost importance to provide general public with a good access to mass transit faci...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good access'.
Suggestion: good access
...portance to provide general public with a good access to mass transit facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, moreover, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16788321168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73069781069 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4618324283 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20243395689 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816389933152 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573081164238 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132315653075 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066148463753 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.