You planned to throw a surprise party for your father on his 60th birthday.
Write a letter to your aunt, in your letter, write-
• Invite her to the surprise party
• Explain why this party means a lot to you
• Say what you want to bring with her
Dear Aunt Molly,
Hope you receive this letter in the best of your health. I am sure you might be aware of the fact that dad is turning 60 next week.
I am planning a surprise party for him, since, none of our festivities are complete without you, therefore I am inviting and informing you well in advance, so that you do not miss the celebration. Moreover, your knowledge of event organization will make the day more manageable.
I am excited about the event and want to make it a memorable one for him. besides, this would be a way to thank him for his never ending support and being a great friend. Additionally, this might be one of the few chances going forward, that I can spend time with him, considering that fact that soon I will be migrating to Australia for work.
The fact cannot be denied that you and dad share a special bond, so can I request you to bring some old photographs of your childhood and college days. I had an idea of running a short film for him during the evening party, besides present it as a souvenir to him. Last but not the least, will it be possible for you to bring your hand-make cookies, he enjoys them during breakfast.
Looking forward seeing you.
best Wishes,
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...of the fact that dad is turning 60 next week. I am planning a surprise party for ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...ant to make it a memorable one for him. besides, this would be a way to thank him for h...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
...fast. Looking forward seeing you. best Wishes, Alex
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49553571429 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45832207351 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2501355012 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283154609117 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988964509826 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805535678292 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161686481587 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682934921909 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.