Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
In today’s modern world, the galloping rate a which science and technology is flourishing, and many political changes in the world, to name but a handful, has made the world full of many different news in different area. Without no doubt, our lives are very dependent on many of such changes. While there is a heated controversy whether we just use a source of news, or multiple of them, I, personally, do believe that a rational choice is using multiple of well-known of the news stations; which, I will present my reasons in the following.
At first, because of many emanating news during the day, there are dozens of such sources such television, radio, abundance of newswebpages, to name quite a few. In case many of decisions depend on such media, getting information from some reliable sources make us a more cognizant citizen. By doing so, we will be sure that we have made our home a decent place for living on the grounds that by taking rational choices, every member in the family would have a peaceful mind. Having a healthy mind causes a happy life for every strata of society, so it prevents us from having negative thoughts in today’s hectic city life. On the contrary, if you have not found some reliable sources of news or decide based on some fake news sources, it impedes you from doing best in many cases. Moreover, deciding based on just one source of news has not much difference from deciding based on our instincts.
The second privilege of using bunch of news sources has to do with the advantages which it brings for our family specifically and our society and the world generally. Getting reliable news helps us taking more confident decions to not wasting our time, and also our money. As a proverb says:”Time is money,” I believe that time is worth than money, because the dead time will never comes back while by strengting some potentials we may gain the lost money with being hard-bitten and having perseverance. This will help our homes to be a joyfull one which every individual benefits from such careful decisions based on relying on reliable sources of information. Moreover, we will make ourselves a more favorite worker, dentist, teacher, lawyer, to name but handful, by just getting the true news.
In summary, with all these and many other reasons taken into account, it stands to reason that using some reliable sources of information would bring a family some great advantages. Two of them which are more considerable for me, are deciding rationally and not wasting “time” which is our most precious present in the whole life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different news', 'a good deal of different news'.
Suggestion: much different news; a good deal of different news
...t a handful, has made the world full of many different news in different area. Without no doubt, ou...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...t a handful, has made the world full of many different news in different area. Without no doub...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to take' or 'take'.
Suggestion: to take; take
...nerally. Getting reliable news helps us taking more confident decions to not wasting o...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...y. As a proverb says:'Time is money,' I believe that time is worth than mone...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: WORTH_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worse', the comparative of 'bad'?
Suggestion: worse
... is money,' I believe that time is worth than money, because the dead time will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, as to, in summary, no doubt, in many cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87387387387 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69951012639 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511261261261 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3269629913 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197618959496 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711024846415 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482465314187 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126798357043 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291355197306 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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