Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
We are currently living in an era which is dominated by advertisements. Advertisements tempt people to buy particular products by displaying that makes people happy. Moreover, we are keeping updated ourselves in the development of products through advertisements. Somehow, I strongly agree that people inspired to purchase unnecessary things by viewing advertisements.
Nowadays, we are lived in a consumer driven culture that leads to development of more advertisement. Due to advancement in technology and nonstop progress of social media, customers are largely allured by numerous advertising programs. As a result, people buy huge number of products without having a clear purpose of using item. For instance, companies which sell commodities, strengthen lots of campaigns to aim mainly targets to housewives, those people would appeal to overbuying clothing as well as food and do not use it later.
Apart from that, advertisements also have some beneficial aspects. Though advertisements programs, companies introduce quality products to enhance lives of people. They also say thank to advertisements for providing various choices to find best product because of having lots of competition among firms. Furthermore, advertisements let informed us about new evolution in any sector like we are using cell-phones now, but advancement in phone having better camera, artificial intelligence we can get through advertisements. However, in reality, some products do not have authentic quality compared to their advertisements. For example, some beautiful girls used the fake and low-quality cosmetic which have a negative impact on skin.
To recapitulate, despite having lots of advantages of advertisements, i strongly believe that advertisements influence us to buy more unnecessary things.
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- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.Which viewpoint do you agree with? 78
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.Which viewpoint do you agree with? 56
- A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:explain what you are currently doingdescribe your suitability for this area of worksay when 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the best'.
Suggestion: find the best
...ements for providing various choices to find best product because of having lots of compe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83333333333 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4395524593 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5968178259 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275263355832 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866144733513 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373808820013 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156690231012 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400486457179 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.