The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
society is the amalgamation of diverse people.cooperation is the root of a firm and fulfill society. As the claim suggested i agree with the thought that sense of cooperation is the appropriate path to prepare the young one`s for the future challenges whether in the field of government or industry or fields other than that.
As the phrase defines "United, we Stand", suggested that to if we cooperate our coworkers ,colleagues, then the message of cooperation diffuse in whole society, and as a result the niche around us becomes quite warm, supportive and benevolent.
For instance, in the defense forces, all the cadets work together , live together, faces various difficult task together, and they got the feeling of cooperation, which helps them in the real time situation.
Leadership is not like a monarchy, leader has to care about its people.More he thought about welfare of his people, more he got cooperation from his people. for example, Martin luthor king Jr, fought for the common people which led to making of a great nation. hence he was a great leader. In the field of indutries, leader has to very responsible for his workers. and in the reward his industry will reach new heights every single notion.
However sense of competition is the other side of the coin. sense of competition, sometimes gives you motivation to do better than your coworker, and viceversa, which leds to overall growth of the whole niche. Moreover competition also motivates the competitor to invent new thoughts and new ideas, which also help in the updation of the whole market. But sense of competition should not reach to every extent of society. one should know when to put paddle on the gas and when to apply brake.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85540750009 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7230034072 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209370740656 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624111485318 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065492624645 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973887800972 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664653626093 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.