All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity,
How could it be tackled?
Obesity is a rising problem in the world today. The main cause of this problem is unhealthy eating habits and the most viable solution is a public awareness campaign warning people about the dangers of eating junk food.
The principle cause of the rise in obesity is the over reliance of junk food by people. Junk food is processed food which is manufactured in mass quantities for quick human consumption. Apart from being tasty, this type of food is often not regulated properly and offers little or no nutritional value to an individual. This results in people to suffer from health problems, such as heart diseases and diabetes, at a very young age. For example, a recent survey by the American Food Association found that 60% people prefer to eat burgers and pizzas from restaurants rather than homemade dishes, because it tastes better than the latter.
To tackle this problem the government should launch a publicity campaign in the media and schools to educate people about the dangers of consuming such unhealthy food. Many people do not understand the detrimental health implications of consuming sugar-rich and calorie dense foods. An awareness campaign could shed some light on this difficult situation and enable people to make more informed decisions towards their health. For example, a similar exercise in Japan resulted in a 20% decrease in people reducing their intake of sodas and colas to counter the rampant spread of diabetes across the county.
In conclusion, obesity is a major issue that is plaguing our society today that can result in massive health problems in later stages of life, however, it can addressed by educating people about the dangers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: IN_PRINCIPAL[3]
Message: Did you mean 'principal' (=main)?
Suggestion: principal
...the dangers of eating junk food. The principle cause of the rise in obesity is the ove...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'address'
Suggestion: address
...n later stages of life, however, it can addressed by educating people about the dangers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08303249097 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56367514352 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0734502902 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155399090434 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653220187073 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525602387317 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987718094351 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362985093142 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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