Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Perhaps the greatest threat to the whole world is currently not atomic bomb, terrorism or an outbreak of population but climate change and environmental degradation. Whether we should try to accept it rather than stop it is a controversial topic. And I totally disagree with this view for the reasons I will outline below.
To begin with, there are various measures that governments and individuals could take to stop, or at least, mitigate climate change. Government could introduce laws to limit carbon dioxide emission which leads to global warming, the main cause of climate change. For instance, it is crucial to impose “green” tax on industrial field and invest in renewable energy production from solar, hydro, and wind power which are believed eco-friendly. Furthermore, every individuals should contribute by utilizing public transportation in lieu of private vehicles and planting as many trees as possible.
If instead of taking the above solutions but simply trying to adapt to it, I suppose that the forward consequences are catastrophic . The Arctic polar ice melt, rising sea level, increasing temperature, depletion of ozone layer are all connected and have huge impacts on human’s life. Take the unpredicted flood in the Central of Vietnam, happening last summer, resulted from climate change as an example . Thousands of residents became homeless and jobless, as a result, and the total damage was uncountable. The potential of human suffering would be huge, and it is possible for the outburst of disease and famine as well as lost prosperity.
To conclude, for our own existence in the mother Earth, we should take immediate actions both in individual and governmental level to prevent the climate change. Otherwise, we may fail to save our planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, at least, for instance, i suppose, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31448763251 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99550088405 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685512367491 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3804797324 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128650408801 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403573600484 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379862980483 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076156199404 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272350817015 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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