You left your watch at friend's home and you want him to send it back. writer him a letter.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
describe your watch
tell him where you left it at
suggest what he can do about it.
Dear Dave,
Hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter to let you know that I mistakenly forgot to pick my wrist watch while I was leaving from your place.
It is a Fossil smartwatch with a rose gold chain and a silver tone metallic chain. Additionally, at the backside of the dial you would find my name printed in royal blue ink.
A night before, while I was packing my luggage, I kept it in one of the side drawers besides the bed in the guest room, with a thought that it will be handy next morning. Unfortunately, it completely went off my mind.
I would appreciate in case you could send me the watch at my postal address. You can parcel the same through Blue Dart courier services, since they are the best delivery agents for such valuable items. Their courier facility is reliable and smooth. However, the only drawback is that, you will have to prepare the package on your own and they will secure the packet in front of you.
Pay my regards to uncle and aunt, also thanks for the help.
Best Wishes
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt off my mind. I would appreciate in case you could send me the watch at my p...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4502617801 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26647757298 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670157068063 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0624556737 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191391133972 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599095293784 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658448107447 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914396843558 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930636751809 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.