Write a letter to your friend with whom you spent a weekend participating party regarding his relocation to new house. In the letter, you should:
- Describe what you liked the most at their new apartment
- Why did you like the weekend
- When and where do you want to meet them again
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well. Thank you so much for the great weekend. I really enjoyed myself during the two-day I spent at your new place.
New flat is really well furnished with the nice interior and vibrant colors. On top of that, the society is quite neat and well-managed, you were fortunate enough to get such serene place in the noisy city like Mumbai. However, I liked huge swimming pool in your society the most.
I did not realize how time flew when were together. Multiple activities like swimming, cooking at home, playing board games made our weekend special. Not only playing cards late night but also having a tea at 3 AM in the morning added to the fun and made our time memorable.
As a matter of the fact that you like hiking trails, I would like to invite you to the trek which I planned with my roommates next month. I will be more than a happy, if you would join us. Going for the trekking in this season would be real adventure.
Hope to see you soon.
Kind regards,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...s late night but also having a tea at 3 AM in the morning added to the fun and made our time memo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4414893617 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16809319732 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696808510638 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7478109981 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6428571429 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35428227474 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106940042654 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076225427318 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189743527357 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733579491655 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.