Some people believe that advertisements are misleading for children, while advertiser claim that they provide knowledge. Give your opinion.
In the emergence of media and advertising many parents are complaining about the advertisers creating delusive commercials to lure their children, whereas companies are refraining to that claim. In my opine children are being mislead by the companies because there are many other ways children can get the knowledge. This essay will discuss how companies are adopting varied ways to reach to the children.
Advertisement distorts reality and creates unrealistic expectations in children's mind. In other words, companies use the imaginary content to persuade the child to buy their products. Despite the fact that it can be harmful to children, they do it just for the purpose of increasing their sell. For example, a well-known fast food chain McDonald in India, started giving a toy with their happy meal option to lure the children. Data shows that they have increased the sell of happy meal up to the large extent with this campaign.
Although organisations argued giving knowledge to the children by adverts, they misuse the child psychology and modify the content to promote their product. They prevent showing product's demerit in a subtle way that child's mind can't capture it. This issue was so prominent in the Unite States that president warned food companies about their advertisements owing to the fact that TV commercials of fast food and other high calorie foods are contributing to the increase rate of obesity in the children.
In Conclusion, I agree to the fact that catchy promotions by some companies mislead the child to buy their products. In my opinion government should warn such companies and companies should also morally understand the ill-effects of such campaign on the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76647458736 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5175458096 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221537995458 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798239820361 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528970929582 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130347263355 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504735683304 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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