For many people the reason they hard work is to earn money To what extent do you agree or disagree

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For many people, the reason they hard work is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Although different people work for different reasons, getting high pay is the most vital of them. In my opinion, I agree to this point. This essay will discuss the necessity of money followed by how it gained more value in recent time.

To begin with, value of money is indispensable in everyone's life. Since ages money played a significant role to prove someone's importance in our society. In the developing countries like us, where the major population is still struggling to get the basic needs of their families, one has to put a huge efforts to earn one's living. In addition to that in the metro cities the cost of living and basic amenities is so exorbitant that one has to work harder in order to live and fulfill the need.

Furthermore, in recent times the trends has been emerged to live a luxurious life and consequently a person spends most of his life in earning rather than actually living. In other words, there are plethora of options on which you can spend extravagantly to get the comfort and luxury which can give you pleasure. As a result even the affluent people are also lured to put an extra effort to earn more. However, one should take into account that the most beautiful things are not associated with money; they are memories and moments. If you don't celebrate those, they can pass you by.

To summarise, most of the people spend their life working hard earning more either to fulfill their needs or to get more luxury in life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, still, as to, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65250965251 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43987951142 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.893496708 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6923076923 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169371338352 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576450164705 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295574878511 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959015246492 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229962408925 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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