Smacking children is the best form of discipline.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is universally acknowledge that spanking children is one of the most debatable and contentious concerns these day. Although, it is thought by many parents that; corporal punishment is an extremely effective way to make them behave. This essay will have deep insight on all aspects of the argument, whereas the idea of smacking kids is completely preposterous.
Firstly, smacking is a long lasting lesson learnt and has great impact on child’s behavior. There is a robust argument for beating of children by their parents, they believe that remembering the pain of spanking will refrain child from ill-mannered activities in future. In addition, infants nowadays are stubborn and they do no behave on verbal warnings so, parents are only left with physical punishments options. A succinate example proclaiming this, In UK, statistics reveals that, 80% of the children refuse to obey their parents, parents admit that their off-spring learn more after spanking and it has a deep impact.
On the other hand, despite the few benefits of spanking, considering it as most effective method of civilizing children is completely a ridiculous approach. Additionally, it causes an irreversible damage to the individual’s psychology and behavior towards the society and they loss the sense of love, affection and respect for their elders. For instance, an 8-year-old child was reported by the hospital who suffered from physical punishment and became a psychopath. Furthermore, it brings many disastrous effects in their life and they eventually become unable to bring their best out of them.
To conclude, this essay argued that; physically hitting is considered as best technique ever by those who have a flawed understanding of parenting and underestimate the consequences of what they believe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'acknowledged'.
Suggestion: acknowledged
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...most debatable and contentious concerns these day. Although, it is thought by many parent...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...rain child from ill-mannered activities in future. In addition, infants nowadays are stub...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'irreversible damage'.
Suggestion: irreversible damage
...ulous approach. Additionally, it causes an irreversible damage to the individual's psychology and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44128113879 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06915518172 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5676194811 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.416666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868883639324 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307713343596 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199475652915 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053633816358 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134818497721 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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