You play sport (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter:
– Say how you feel about the news
– Ask about the treatment in the hospital
– Suggest some ways of cheering him/her up
Dear Jay,
I'm writing this letter to you because i heard that one of our team player named ray is admitted to a hospital. I felt very sad about it.
Let me know how he is. whether ray got injured severly.Has doctor said anything regard his injuries. hope its a minimal one.Did he get enough medicination over there and would you need any help from my side.im ready to do whatever he needs. As you know , I'm stuck with other activities, i couldn't visit him at a hospital.Have you seen him at a hospital.
Ask him to relax and we will take care of the match.However this isn't a last football match.Dont worry about that. Can i suggest some measures like Be calm, do meditate and some physical activities such as walking ,warm up etc.Please convey my regard to him and his parents. we will gather up at a final match very soon.
hope he'll recover soon.
yours lovingly ,
Aarthi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ctor said anything regard his injuries. hope its a minimal one.Did he get enough med...
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...ery soon. hope hell recover soon. yours lovingly , Aarthi
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...ope hell recover soon. yours lovingly , Aarthi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53101475011 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.73125 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3106054902 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1818181818 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205010667335 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660783687712 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074487931562 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10559093409 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106191895728 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.