Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is more important than others?
The success of a country is usually defined in economic terms. However, there are also several factors, apart from the economy, could be used to assess a nation, and I believe that education is the most essential of all.
education, crime rates, and health should be taken into account when measuring a country’s status. A sound education system is vital for the development of any nation, with schools, colleges, universities bearing the responsibility for the quality of future generations of workers. The other indicator which makes a country’s success is the low rate of offenders because a state cannot be flourished if it has hundreds of criminal cases to deal with every year. Finally, healthcare provision is regarded as a standard of living in a nation, and it can be measured by looking at the life expectancy rate or availability of medical services. For instance, a country in which people are not vaccinated are easy to suffer from diseases, and it might be considered less successful than a country where citizens have better health.
In my view, a country’s education system should be seen as the most critical indicator of its success and level of development. education has a considerable effect on the two factors mentioned above. As many people become criminals due to poverty and unemployment, schooling can help people avoid committing crimes by providing them knowledge, then they can find a job, and earn money. education also affects health in the sense that doctors and nurses need to be trained, and scientists need to be educated in high levels to carry out medical research.
In conclusion, nations could be assessed and compared in a variety of ways, but a nation’s standard of education is the best measure of its success.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-06 | dacosta | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-27 | Maanpreet | 56 | view |
| 2019-08-29 | Gowridevaraj | 67 | view |
| 2019-08-27 | Mahmoudrefaey | 56 | view |
| 2019-05-14 | KD Ho | 78 | view |
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 89
- The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits andvegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- the diagram shows the process of how to make smoked fish Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 63
- In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers are important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion? 78
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
...tion is the most essential of all. education, crime rates, and health should be take...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
...f its success and level of development. education has a considerable effect on the two fa...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
...en they can find a job, and earn money. education also affects health in the sense that d...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, so, then, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09589041096 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00507015107 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8923070025 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243663668526 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920860485165 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051110590046 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142498460565 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392129820745 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.