Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in. To what extent do you agree?
A significant number of people believe that students should focus on every subject in their curriculum. However, others do not agree and think that targeting a single subject is better in which they are perfect or they are more fascinated. In my opinion, single subject attention is the most effective way of learning.
A study by teenagers in the most interesting subject will make them more confident and strong in a particular subject, and studying the interesting subject does not require much effort from the student as well as a mentor. Some children use their free time also in studying their favourite topics, for instance, literature some develop this habit of reading books for a life time and read novels in their leisure time. Moreover, such an attitude makes them more intellectual and confident in their career goals. It has been often observed that keen on one particular subject by the pupil makes him perfect in that subject.
On the other side, kids focusing all the subjects in their school time have a big advantage of changing career options whenever they wish in future. Furthermore, studying all the subjects by children makes their ability more strong in terms of managing things, which later help them in jobs or at the workplace. For illustration, studying science and sports simultaneously in schools increase the ability of kids and makes them multitalented.
In conclusion, students focus on all the subjects gives them a benefit to choosing a career from any of the selected prospects in future. Although, single subject interest is more valuable and useful for the kids as it helps them to remain focused in the particular direction and their motives are clear for future goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has often been
...and confident in their career goals. It has been often observed that keen on one particular su...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...nging career options whenever they wish in future. Furthermore, studying all the subjects...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...reer from any of the selected prospects in future. Although, single subject interest is m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05985915493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68207948928 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538732394366 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.511293644 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284406057661 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111262057798 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766899405787 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183994207369 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845869365529 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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