We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we cannot trust the journalist. What do you think? What qualities do you think a successful journalist should have?
Because of their prevalence, media have had a great impact on people’s lives in
the modern world. While many people are thankful to media for being
informative and knowledgeable, many cast doubts on the information they obtain
from sources such as newspapers or television programs due to questions of the
journalists' honesty. I am inclined to believe that the public should access
information through media with a critical eye.
To begin with, it is true that the majority of journalists have to follow their boss’
visions when they are performing their duties and thus cannot convey everything
honestly. Journalists usually do their job by following themes, focusing on the
youth for instance, or in a narrowly focusing on the subjects they are assigned.
This causes the true, complete story to be broken into pieces to suit the limitation
of their column or allotted broadcast time, bringing about unclear and inaccurate
messages to audiences, not to mention the fact that sometimes descriptions can
be changed to grab the audiences’ attention. Moreover, advertisements,
business, and sometimes politics are working behind the scenes, influencing
journalists to change
However, it seems unfair to generalize such a controversial field. Many journalists
have fought for truth. The illegal activities of industrial corporations, who try to
sneak through the flaws in regulations to gain profits for their own, have been
uncovered; cheating in elections and stories about human trafficking or powerful
people’s illegal actions have been journalists’ consistent and sometimes lifethreating works. Those journalists have contributed to exposing the truth, thereby
establishing more equal societies.
To become successful journalists, some features could be considered as
standards. First, writing ability is a must. This means not only being proficient in
writing language, but also being able to communicate news brilliantly. Second,
critical thinking and analyzing capabilities are highly regarded since these help
journalists grasp and determine what is critical to be published. Finally, the
eagerness to create good media also contributes to define successful journalists.
To conclude, media are dominant in our lives and information is immense. Having
sharp minds when reading, and perceiving news through media; being aware of
the messaging behind the news can prevent audiences from being trapped by
untrustworthy information
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, honestly, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2510.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 6.85792349727 5.12529762239 134% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17938998997 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.1111998143 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.647058824 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.38176352705 730% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182611388344 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535673197479 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037970174447 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397916801864 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421191612312 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.51 12.4159519038 181% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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