Sports in general is a way of excersising the body muscles.
If you come to think of it and ask your self why do we do sports your answer is going to be either exercise ,gain fame or become rich.
No sport is actually safe but we are given some precautions to ensure our safety but still some sports need to be band
Sports that are involved with the use of extremely sharp objects like fencing,hockey,ice skating should be band because if that sharp object can get a cut through the costume and opens it,it has exposed the participant to major danger or even worse if if it should touch the skin because it's very certain for such person to loose that part of his body for instance in ice skating if the participants want to perform an impossible stunt like the death spin and their skates should end up having contact with each other there will be a major disaster .And that have to do with jumping from great heights because of some elements of nature like weather,it's a very tricky think one moment it's sunny and bright and the next thing you now is its dark and cloudy which can lead to disasters in sports like sky diving.
And also any sport that those not have any thing to do with excersising the body should be band because most of them can be maximal threats to people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ur answer is going to be either exercise ,gain fame or become rich. No sport is a...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty but still some sports need to be band Sports that are involved with the use of...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hockey
... of extremely sharp objects like fencing,hockey,ice skating should be band because if t...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'banded'?
Suggestion: banded
...ke fencing,hockey,ice skating should be band because if that sharp object can get a ...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...t a cut through the costume and opens it,it has exposed the participant to major da...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: if
...rticipant to major danger or even worse if if it should touch the skin because its ve...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: IF_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...cipant to major danger or even worse if if it should touch the skin because its ve...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...use its very certain for such person to loose that part of his body for instance in i...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ach other there will be a major disaster .And that have to do with jumping from g...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...h other there will be a major disaster .And that have to do with jumping from grea...
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Line 5, column 583, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...saster .And that have to do with jumping from great heights because of some eleme...
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Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , its
... of some elements of nature like weather,its a very tricky think one moment its sunn...
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Line 5, column 652, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...of some elements of nature like weather,its a very tricky think one moment its sunn...
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Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...y and bright and the next thing you now is its dark and cloudy which can lead to d...
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Line 5, column 801, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ch can lead to disasters in sports like sky diving. And also any sport that those not ...
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Line 5, column 813, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to disasters in sports like sky diving. And also any sport that those not have a...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... And also any sport that those not have any thing to do with excersising the body should ...
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Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'banded'?
Suggestion: banded
... do with excersising the body should be band because most of them can be maximal thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, still, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38075313808 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29566456696 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589958158996 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 355.722767756 49.4020404114 720% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.75 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.75 20.7667163134 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234818258879 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131002472592 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476067633145 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129731659167 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400187434933 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 13.0946893788 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.9 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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