Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know:
when you will be arriving and leaving
what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost
inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear sir,
I am Harry Singh from Rhode island. I have planned a weekend trip to New york to celebrate my daughter's tenth birthday which on 22nd June. I am writing this letter to enquire about the room availability at your renowned hotel and request some relevant information about nearby attractions.
I will be coming with my family that includes my parents, wife and my daughter. We will arrive on 22nd morning and stay there till 24th afternoon. We need an air-conditioned room with two bed rooms, 2 bathrooms and a kitchen. I will be thankful you if you could arrange a chocolate flavor cake for my daughter, as it would be great surprise for her. In addition I wanted to know, if your hotel provide cab service to explore nearby places. It would be great if you mention us all the details and charges for that class of room and other services.
Also it would be really generous of you, if you could guide me with details about any events organised during that weekend along with that please suggest me some attractive tourist places to visit near your hotel. You can contact me at 401-589-3667 or you could email me the details at harry.singh@gmail.com
Looking forward for a comfortable stay at you hotel.
Your Sincerely
Harry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am Harry Singh from Rhode island. I ha...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ters tenth birthday which on 22nd June. I am writing this letter to enquire about...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nformation about nearby attractions. I will be coming with my family that incl...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... it would be great surprise for her. In addition I wanted to know, if your hotel provide...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...at class of room and other services. Also it would be really generous of you, if ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76958525346 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76924401925 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626728110599 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9497332872 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307262271051 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947217579475 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736575411193 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176456325688 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480411979559 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.