Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
As globalization is going on and price of transportation to other country is going down, people tend to leave their country and move to large cities such as London, Vancouver, and New York. One of the reasons is to find a good place to live. However, people who move to new city may be discriminated by local people due to the language and cultural difference. Therefore, government needs to make some policy to ensure all the people to live harmoniously.
Firstly, government can make some programs to encourage people from other country to adapt well in society. The example of this policy can be language or history program run by public or private institute. When people understand the history of the country, they feel more comfortable to understand difference of culture and it can help them to communicate local people.
Secondly, world history should be mandatory on secondary school to make our children to respect foreigners. When we teach our children focusing on their own history, they may have prejudiced perspective to other country and cannot embrace difference of others. Teaching this difference to young children will ultimately contribute to make people live harmoniously.
Lastly, government can give benefits on tax for those who immigrate to the country for a specific period. These economic benefits will make immigrants to take some time and spend their time to be more involved community works.
In conclusion, these three policies can help foreigners to live harmoniously and they will make more balanced society.
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. 61
- Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. 61
- Each year the crime rate increases What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity 78
- In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? 73
- Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d they will make more balanced society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86741974604 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2361106818 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283579189456 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991796292881 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655012348077 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144503489475 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619262567769 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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