In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
there is increasing concern that the number of young people who watch the news on tv or read newspapers is growing down. this can be negative impact on our society. there are some reasons why young people do not like reading newspaper and watching tv news.
First, internet has become the most powerful tool to get information or news. Without buying newspapers and watching tv, people can easily access the internet through their smartphone and check the latest news. Also, internet makes people to be able to share their opinions about news and provides various functions such as searching the topics or saving favorite articles. Therefore, people prefer internet through their smartphones rather than traditional methods.
Another reason is that people can feel some newspapers and tv channels are controlled by government. Not long time ago and even now, broadcasting companies in some countries are forced to follow government’s policy so that the government can get advocation from their people. Sometimes, the government pushes broadcasting companies to make a very provocative articles to manipulate people. Due to this fact, people are disappointed on broadcasting companies and become not interested in newspapers or news.
To encourage young people to like newspapers and news on tv, school needs to teach their young students the importance of these traditional ways of getting news, how to accept the facts from them, and how to make their perspective. If students are trained by school to earn these skills, young people would understand the advantages of the newspapers and news on tv and can enjoy these things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29118773946 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82185403673 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2384108075 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263671529877 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109603214813 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688859573936 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175468971891 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682709595976 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.