Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? Is this a positive development or negative development?
It is true that present generation have extremely little knowledge about the ancient civilization and their unique culture. There are numerous reasons because of which people are moving away from their old tradition and cultural values. However, I assert it is undoubtedly having an adverse effects on individuals and society.
The predominant factors which are contributing for this decline in awareness about culture and tradition are globalization and increasing trend of nuclear family. Primarily due to globalization whole world has become a small village. Youngsters are following the lifestyle of advance nations and forgetting their own culture. For example, people of different nations earlier have varied way of clothing, but now whole world is wearing the outfits of the popular brands like nike and adidas. Apart from this, due to job and employments opportunities young people are living without their parents or grandparents. Because of growing in nuclear family, children do not get the chance to interact with their elders, and ultimately it leads to lack of understanding among them about their own culture.
This trend is ,however, bringing many negative changes. Every country of the world is unique and known for its historical values, ethics and history. If whole world will become the same there will be nothing left to explore and travel. History has vital things to taught and knowledge of own culture has an important role in developing the overall personality of any individual. Proper knowledge of past is essential to keep the roots of any civilization alive. People of any society are united because of their traditional and cultural similarities. This declining awareness of their traditions also having an adverse impact on the community life of the people's.
In conclusion, unequivocally understanding of tradition and culture is important for the young generation because they are the future of the nations. They must try to imbibe that knowledge so that they can keep their history alive
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3875 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85457418015 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0776915495 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210343595333 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615474447931 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545026032778 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120499694316 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302315928976 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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