Many people expect that the proportion of old people will be more than the young people in the future. Do you think it is positive or negative development?
A huge segment of society anticipate that in coming years, total population will have more aged people and the percentage of youngsters will decline. Although, they may be few advantages, but overall it will be a adverse change and will definitely have untoward repercussions.
To begin with, the predominant problem will be lack of energetic and update workforce. Senior citizens do not have the adequate knowledge of the latest technology advancements, which are helpful in performing any task in less time and with high efficiency. Moreover, there are many strenuous task which requires great physical strength and can be done by easily done by young people. Apart from this, government has to to put huge part of the total budget for medical facilities. Since in old age human body becomes weak and immunity decreases, diseases will spread at faster rate and ultimately one has to more concern about their health and fitness. If major amount of public funds are devoted to health care sector, other vital development and areas will be adversely effected and there will be lack of growth in economy and nation will suffer. Hence, youth are essential for prosperity of any country.
Digging deeper, in later age of life great care and attention is required. It is the period of life when a person has to be free from all the responsibilities and worries, but if there will no young ones to take proper care and fulfill the needs of the seniors they will not be able to enjoy their life in efficient manner. However, few merits will be there like the crime rate will decline and youngsters can get the useful guidance from the aged persons. Old age citizens have the more experience of the life and they can help in better understanding of the life to young minds. In other words, old people can show the path, but ultimately it has to be lead and followed by the youth.
In conclusion, unequivocally declining number of youth population and growing seniors will have more drawbacks for both nation and individuals. Seniors can act as the mentor but growth can be achieved by the performance undertaken by youngsters
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, apart from, as to, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.891966759 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68255625693 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534626038781 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8274759089 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226726397654 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071464199507 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053197008812 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138883711785 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496248993673 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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