When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive
globally most of the countries focus on increase it's technology will result in eradication of people and countries traditional skills and way of life. These people claim that technology development alone will uplift their country to compete in global market, rather than keeping alive of the old traditional skills and ways of life. This essay will argue why traditional skills and way of life is moderately necessary despite of technology.
most of the countries focus is on developing new technologies and be a leader in global market. because the entire world is being driven now by technology. By using those technologies they can sell and develop their own economy. For instance lot of countries identifying new devices and expanded their market globally to bring up their own people's life standard and economy.The above said development and financial growth led many countries to focus only on technology growth alone.
In spite of technology development, it is necessary for the country to keep traditional skills and way of life alive for the betterment of their own people's life style. Nowadays everyone is running behind technologies by losing their own individuality will cause some depression and stress at earlier stages of life. For instance people's life span has been decreased because of competing with technology. Overall all the above issues can be sorted out by following our traditional skills in a moderate way.
This essay argued that country against keeping the traditional skills and way of life is not good for country's future society. In my opinion keeping alive of the old traditional skills and way of life is moderately necessary rather than focus on developing the technology alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82421900363 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481884057971 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5091239048 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370183619737 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162156124889 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978190614984 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27534436456 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104111192338 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.