Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets. There is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give you opinion.
Technology has boomed over the last few decades. Due to this, several people think that movies can be seen on the mobile phones or on tablets. So, going to cinema is unnecessary. Proponents of the opposite thoughts believe that obtaining real joy of the movies is possible in theatres only. What are the appropriate ways to enjoy films at it’s best? A thorough scrutiny of the above will lead to an insightful response.
Although people incline towards one side over the other, I prefer to present a balanced ergo objective assessment.
In my opinion, there are some reasons to enjoy movies at home. However, there are some considerable factors for watching movies in theatres. Following two paragraphs will discuss both the aspects extensively.
First and foremost, latest movies with exceptional quality have been available on the internet. Nowadays, software application subscriptions can help us to watch those movies multiple times at leisure. Secondly, it is affordable to enjoy as many films we can think of as it is unlimited. For Instance, Amazon Prime or Netflix gives access to all the latest movies which can be seen with family with no extra cost involved than the minimal subscription fees.
On the contrary, movies must be enjoyed on huge screens containing visual effects as it is a great source of entertainment. Watching celebrating on big screens is always a mesmerising experience. Apart from that, an individual gets an opportunity to socialise with friends and family. In support of the above, “Avengers- the endgame” will be enjoyed to it’s fullest with our partners where we can discuss the facts and incidents after the show.
Keeping all of the above mentioned facts in mind, easy availability and affordability of latest movies are evident.
However, experiencing the actual visual effects and discussions of the same with companions are well worthy of an equivalent consideration. To conclude, as is most of the things in life, this matter has two sides. Fortunately, in this case, both of them are constructive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...nd, easy availability and affordability of latest movies are evident. However, experienc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23123123123 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9910995313 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5280415382 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1363636364 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177688311427 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462920378181 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521983434973 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711818538609 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480251894511 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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