In this fast and ever-changing global era, the governments and organizations worldwide are facing a myriad of issues. These severe issues include poverty, terrorism, global warming and many more. Among all, the most important problem which required urgent attention is global warming due to the mammoth growth of industries and urban development.
To begin with, to eradicate the detrimental impact of rising temperatures governments have a major role to play. Legislators should form stricter environmental policies and laws. For instance, companies responsible for emitting toxic gases should be fined heavily and impose a ban. Moreover, governments should improve and provide state of the art public transport facilities and restrict the use of plastic bags and bottles made of harmful chemicals for protecting the atmosphere.
On the other hand, it is equal responsibilities of organizations to align with the government's efforts and abide green laws. Companies should drive innovation towards alternate sources of energy like solar and wind power. For example, recent inventions in the area of solar technologies have provided larger benefits in India having enormous sunlight throughout the year.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that both the government's world over and organizations world over will have to work in collaboration for saving the planet for the future generations and the inhabitants.
- the Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree? 85
- Companies should pay attention to reputation and branding or special sales and discount? Do you agree or disagree? 85
- In education system, assessment through formal written examination is still valid? Agree or Disagree? 88
- Do you think formal written assessments in today's world to assess students’ performance is effective or not? Discuss your viewpoint on this and support your answer with examples. 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
... governments should improve and provide state of the art public transport facilities and restric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 20.9802955665 24% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65740740741 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07751647953 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662037037037 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5545090625 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.090909091 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233896592683 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707525409431 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638924859599 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129743381705 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532304669355 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.