Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given to traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?
Some people support the opinion that penalize traffic offender, while other oppose the opinion. Having said that, following traffic regulation cab be beneficial for an individual as well as for families, I support this opinion and it will be discussed in following paragraphs.
Many people do not follow traffic rules, which leads to multiple consequences for an individual. There are many ways to break traffic rules. For instance, not wearing helmet on two-wheeler, did not wear seal belt while driving four-wheeler, crossing or jumping red signal, not following speed regulations etc. When an individual does that, an accident can happen, it may lad to serious injury. For example, due to someone met with an accident, some serious injury can happen and may result in lifelong injury. It is very important that, these offenses should be strictly punished to save life or bad accident with an individual.
On the other had victim’s families also suffers due to these mishappenings. As per research done on accident happened on national highways, 80% of these accidents happens due to people do not follow proper traffic rules. Therefore, they die in road accident and in many cases, the beard and butter winner of the family dies in it, after that dependents suffer significant loss. In such cases families do not get insurance as well. A strict penalty on breaking traffic rules may save some lives.
To conclude, it is highly recommended to have stricter punishment for breaking the traffic rules. I fully support this as it saves someone life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended having'.
Suggestion: recommended having
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13779527559 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73942485002 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5328108641 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140868811727 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519950421977 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485543706449 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932004755419 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129023560643 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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