It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city
children are backbone for every nation therefore, it is debeat among people where should be child grown. Some people tend to believe countryside is better than big cities to rise and nourishment of kid. these both place have thier own pros and cons. this essay will discuss advatages and disadvatages of living children.
To emabark on, significance of residing in villages for children. First of all, undoubtly uncomparable heath and mental abilities can be imprived while living in rural side. Additionally, there is fresh air and less pollution of atmosphere thus, there would be great feeling of clean and breathtaking natural facilities. For instance, in countryside ozon layer is higher than compared to cities. secondly, spacious area to play planty of sport activities and the best clamful place to read kinly. Moreover, it has been seen that village children more healthy from mently and phisicaly compared to town children. However there is always lack of modern amenities such as trasport, wifi, schooland colleges and hospitals for efficient cure of child.
On the other hand, writing about benefits living in mega cities. Firstly, good and effective primary facilitis and charming educational opportunities for urban child. For example, medical and educatinal amenities have been uplifted by new government. secondly, child who reside in citues who are more likely intelligent in technological knowledge when rival villagers. Forthermore, parent earn handsome amount of money hence they would enjoye the greater time of thier life in amusing tasks. Thirdly, privatisation is famous for their services in every corner of world and this aspect leads urban children to prepare for future in professional way.
In conclusion, children may live or rise in countryside or in mega cities there will be different merite and demerit. these both places are important to improve ability of particular child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39799331104 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77608896611 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658862876254 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9634405143 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.9473684211 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2631578947 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270908613878 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721390213859 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856883686074 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1619186651 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065382165092 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.