blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years.As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed.All blood sports should be banned.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
Despite of the fact that killing of animal for sports is popular in modern society, it remains a contentious issue. I strongly refute that blood sports are unethical and cruel and it should be prohibited completely worldwide.
To begin with, one argument might be put forward in blood sports that these activities are performed for sake of entertainment. In ancient times, people played blood sports since they have no enough leisure activity, so they pitted their animals against each other and spectators enjoyed bloodshed. In addition to it, mostly people like these activities because they want to test their abilities and capacities by playing such sports. For instance, every year great number of people takes part in Bull fighting to test their courage, even though most of them either lost their lives or sustain serious injuries. Last but not least, in many countries these sports are carried out for gambling purpose. People bet huge money in these activities.
However, I do not believe these arguments stand up to scrutiny. The exploitation of animal in any case whether for pleasure, testing limits or for earning money is barbaric and brutal. The obvious reason for this belief is that animals have equal right as human. This activity violates the animal protection act. Moreover, these sports are obnoxious for animals. Some of them lost their lives or if not could sustain serious injuries or even traumatized in such sports. Therefore, such act is unjustified, cruel and not commendable in any civilized society.
In conclusion, I believe that blood sports must be banned, since no civilized society allows killing of animal for sake fun and others whatsoever purpose. I hope government around the world discuss this issue with haste and forbid the inhumane activity immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in any case, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21305841924 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58071254328 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7168176663 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2352941176 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234609089132 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077901186586 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674893230445 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162616852971 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405496682129 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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