More and more people buy a wide range of household goods such as
television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is a positive or
negative development?
With the development of technology, people are now owning more goods for their
home. Although this development is beneficial to manufacturers and the economy, I
think in the long run, it would be harmful to the environment.
It is reasonable why this trend is considered temporarily positive. The fact that many
people are buying household goods can be interpreted as more and more people are
investing their effort in their families. This conveys a positive social message, that the
overall living standards are improving and that families are spending more time together,
hence the demand for household equipment. Secondly, this trend will expand the market,
which is beneficial to manufacturers.
However, in the long run, this consumption trend can be negative. Buying numerous
household goods is one of the many forms of excessive consumerism. When people are
affected by excessive consumerism, their priorities in life will be distorted. Instead of
focusing on using their own existing goods, they will have an urge to buy and own more
goods. This development is not positive for the environment. Owning more products
means using up more natural resources. Also, when people want to replace owned
products, they will dispose large amounts of waste. There is scientific evidence showing
that discarded household appliances are very harmful when disposed to the environment
in large quantities.
The development of this shopping trend of many people might seems to benefit the
economy at first glance. However, in the long run, this development will leave negative
impacts on the environment. Therefore, people should understand where to draw the
line between investing effort in their family, and affecting the environment.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people might seems to benefit the economy at first glance. However, in the...
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Line 20, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...un, this development will leave negative impacts on the environment. Therefore...
^^^
Line 21, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evelopment will leave negative impacts on the environment. Therefore, people...
^^
Line 21, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opment will leave negative impacts on the environment. Therefore, people sh...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t will leave negative impacts on the environment. Therefore, people should ...
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Line 21, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpacts on the environment. Therefore, people should understand where to d...
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Line 21, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on the environment. Therefore, people should understand where to draw the...
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Line 21, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... environment. Therefore, people should understand where to draw the line ...
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Line 21, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Therefore, people should understand where to draw the line between inve...
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Line 21, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fore, people should understand where to draw the line between investing e...
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Line 21, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., people should understand where to draw the line between investing effor...
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Line 21, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple should understand where to draw the line between investing effort in t...
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Line 21, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...should understand where to draw the line between investing effort in their f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52398523985 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8897960391 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.070960437 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 144.0 5.01903807615 2869% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275632467293 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940204149626 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648621860499 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812528845699 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833952891177 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.