Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging.
Several people believe that retail shops, general stores and product producers have a tendency of wrapping the goods with excess packaging, also it is their responsibility to limit the packaging for products. Whereas, other sets of people feel that consumers should stop purchasing goods which consist of over packaging. This essay will discuss both the views. Firstly, this essay will discuss why should companies and manufacturers reduce extra packing? Secondly, this essay will discuss the consumer’s responsibilities to sidestep the products with a lot of packaging.
Firstly, it’s an alarming situation for society to stop using plastic covers. This is the main concern for several people, that they have witnessed usage of plastic rapidly increasing over the years especially in goods packaging. To prove that, Anna University had done many surveys on the usage of plastic products and the results show that 70% plastics used for wrapping or storing the goods on a flipside 30% plastics used as other household products. Cost of plastic recycling is quite higher in developing and poor countries also these products take many years for decomposition which affects the natural environments. There is a possible chance which can be slowly controlled by using other packing methods instead of using plastic materials.
Secondly, it is the consumer’s responsibilities to buy the right product which is limited to less usage of plastic packaging. Once the product sales go down, based on the feedback manufacture will change the selling strategy. The government released a notice saying that more plastic products used in urban places then-rural area. It means there is a lack of awareness in the countryside so the government should create advertisement and camp about the impacts of plastics. By this way, over a period people will reduce the buying of plastic products.
To conclude, this essay addressed my views on excess goods packaging. It can be controlled drastically only if the consumer stop buying unhealthy goods
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.415625 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91158616297 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2097579498 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201544890703 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712295839886 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627664713624 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132558792182 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793840116593 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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