Your local college is organizing an event on the International Student’s Day. You want to speak to students about your country from different cultures. write a letter to the college head.- Tell him/her about the topics you are going to talk about.- Why
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to the oratorical competition to be held on the International Student's Day celebration in our college. I would like to extend my participation in this competition.
The reasons behind my interest in participating are, firstly, the topic been given is "Diversity of cultures across the world". Since I am from India, which is a land of diverse cultures, its possible for me to offer a lot of information on a wide range cultures. In addition, the audience could understand how people with multiple culture and tradition can survive together, by giving due reverence to each other so that they can enhance their tolerance towards all sects of people.
I would like to touch on the following areas in my speech. Primarily, the "Unity in Diversity", which is the pillar of the country's survival. Although the citizens follow various religions like Hinduism, Buddhism, Christianity etc, they unite together as Indians and work for its development. Further more, the multiple festivals celebrated in our country is a major topic to be discussed because it is not celebrated only by the specific group of people but by the entire nation. Finally, the multi lingual aspect, where the citizens group themselves based on their language and take great pride in the literature and poems existing in their language.
Hence I request you to grant me permission to take part in this competition and allow me to explain the great cultural heritage of my country. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Dheepa
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- Your local college is organizing an event on the International Student’s Day. You want to speak to students about your country from different cultures. write a letter to the college head.- Tell him/her about the topics you are going to talk about.- Why 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nd poems existing in their language. Hence I request you to grant me permission to...
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Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you. Yours faithfully Dheepa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17374517375 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03960824096 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7675191052 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118519933627 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439181281928 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421058474958 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668567274974 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211568177813 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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