Some people believe that scientists should use animals for their medicines testing expect human. In comparison, others tend to think these experiments are unethical and brutal and scientist should find another way to test.
From my point of view, human cannot overlook these experiments because these experiment are necessary and essential for human generations and these animals are the victims for science and it is inevitable. For instance, when scientists want to rescue a person who is poisoned. To tackle on this problem they should make sure that the medicine work, so they have to test it on animals at first, eventually, they can test it on human’s body.
On the other hand, people who disagree with this unethical experiments believe the animals cannot defend themselves against these dreadful experiments. In addition, they are bothered of these painful testing. Hence, most of them die during these terrible tests unfortunately because it is a test and the scientists have no experience for new disease at the outset. For example, in the laboratories all over the world, many mouse have been testing for several experiments and they have been dying during these tests. Thereby, Environmentalists concern about this disaster and they want to prevent it presently or alter it with something else.
All in all, despite these experiments are not ethical, human need to utilize these test and it is vital for the survival of human generation. Besides, in this century there is no alternative choice that scientists can alternate animals so it has no equal and they have to continue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mouse seems to be countable; consider using: 'many mice'.
Suggestion: many mice
...in the laboratories all over the world, many mouse have been testing for several experimen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16988416988 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78192227534 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6974670337 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246575763306 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102750464684 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888653531384 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174100900193 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574111681052 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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