More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicines should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?
The high number of individuals are affected by the diet consumption pattern and advance pills are unable to heal them. A significant number of individuals believe that old fashioned medicines must be reintroduced in society. In my opinion, I completely agree because ayurvedic tablets have proven strong recovering, as well as few side effects as compared with current medications available in the market.
Firstly, traditional medicines are in used since ancient times to eliminate diseases from the human body and today their results are widely accepted by scientific individuals also on a global scale. Homemade pills consumption has benefited society a number of times in curing people of various infections. For instance, Homeopathy treatment is commonly used in the Asian region to treat people from impurities of modern diet consumption like food poisoning.
Secondly, the traditional way of treatment has little drawbacks as compared with the advanced method of treatments. They are made with natural ingredients, which makes them capable to digest by the human body without any harm. Hence it possesses a greater advantage over using advanced medicines. For instance, it has been scientifically proven that homeopathy has little side effects even after consuming high dosage, therefore using these tablets have benefited the society.
In conclusion, the use of natural remedies in making pills is way more beneficial for society as it carries little drawbacks and treating humans from infections effectively. Hence I believe that we should introduce again the traditional medicines by looking at the failure of modern medicine to cure infections of the current diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55426356589 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92704442863 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0623574619 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167376271723 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565229379639 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397323144913 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977488446928 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409573483024 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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