Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Smoking should be banned in all public places.
Smoking is a hazardous activity. This is preached by everyone, including the government and the companies that manufacture it. But many people are addicted to it and this leads to a lot of health related problems for them. Smoking does not bring about any goodness in anyone's lives. That said it is a choice that a person makes whether to smoke or not, but the consequences of their smoking should not be bared by others. So in my opinion smoking in pubic places, like beaches, parks, restaurants, hospitals should be banned.
The main reason why I feel it has to be banned in public places is because of passive smoking. Passive smoking is when non-smokers are affected by the smoke from the cigarettes. Although smoking is a choice, no one can force the other person to quit smoking or to start smoking. Similarly people who don't smoke should not be affected it. Smoking in pubic places does exactly this. The air we breathe in is common to everyone. If one person pollutes it, someone nearby is going to be affected by it for sure. Active and passive smoking are both dangerous and lead to lung cancers. being exposed to cigarette smoke once is not going to give cancer but being exposed to it repeatedly, on multiple occasions will have serious repercussions. Even though a person has decided not to smoke they can be equally affected by smoking. According to medical surveys passive smoking is very dangerous to pregnant ladies and elderly people. A governmental ban will be very helpful in this case because not everyone is bold enough to stand up against a smoking person and ask them not to smoke there.
Active and Passive smoking lead to a lot of health related problems like cancers. Cancers have no cure untill now. Considering statistics if a person smokes in a public place he/she is more likely to infect a lot of other people than when smoking in the privacy of their homes. Like I said before smoking is a choice so what a person does behind closed doors should not be of interest to anyone. But spreading disease to others is a serious matter. In a country like India, there are no proper facilities for cancer treatments and the cost of medicines are also very high. So if many people suffer from the misdeeds of others it will also cost the country on an economical level. To make the world free of unwanted disease like cancer it becomes very important to make sure that the effects of smoking don not affect the non smokers who are large in number.
When people smoke in public places, they might not find proper areas to dispose off the cigarette butts and may just throw it on the ground. Recently a picture of a bird feeding a cigarette-butt to it's child was released. This happened on beaches. It is not just humans that are affected by smoking but birds and animals too. When a certain animal or species is affected, it will lead to problems in the food chain and cause lots of environmental problems.
On the whole, smoking in public places affects non-smoking humans, birds, animals and causes a lot of environmental destruction. It does lead to many diseases for which no cure has been found. Government intervention is very necessary at this point to ban smoking in public places. But as I said smoking an only be banned in public places not in private areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
... by others. So in my opinion smoking in pubic places, like beaches, parks, restaurant...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...on to quit smoking or to start smoking. Similarly people who dont smoke should not be aff...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to start smoking. Similarly people who dont smoke should not be affected it. Smokin...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...e should not be affected it. Smoking in pubic places does exactly this. The air we br...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Being
...oth dangerous and lead to lung cancers. being exposed to cigarette smoke once is not ...
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Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...asions will have serious repercussions. Even though a person has decided not to smoke they ...
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Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e cost of medicines are also very high. So if many people suffer from the misdeeds of...
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: large
... don not affect the non smokers who are large in number. When people smoke in public places,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, as to, i feel, in my opinion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2720.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 583.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66552315609 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53775425375 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 864.9 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.674001181 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7142857143 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6571428571 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 3.85842293907 492% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234502605453 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683560796187 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617734374774 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155216440909 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626501470652 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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