Water is natural resource that should always be free. Governments should ban the sale of bottled water.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different thoughts about whether or not governments should ban the sale of bottled water. In point of my view, it is up to the choice of citizens to use tap or bottled water. So, governments should not completely ban bottled water sales.
Some people believe that we should consume less bottled water. The first reason comes from environment problem. Water is usually, or almost bottled in plastic material. We know that it can add litter and waste problems while we are trying to cut plastic waste as much as we can. The second reason is, there is no difference in quality between bottled and tap water. So it is not necessary to spend money and materials to produce bottled water. And finally, water is natural resource, which is owned by all people. Companies should not be able and not have right to earn profit by water commercialization. Therefore, governments should ensure that everyone has free access to clean tap water through banning the bottled water productions. But other people have contrast view. They believe that bottled water is healthier than tap water. Because the process of production is under surveillance that insure the quality, cleanliness of water. They also argue that, the taste of bottled water is better. Moreover, they can carry it whenever and wherever they want. Convenience is competitive edge of bottled water.
In conclusion, I think that people have right to choose to use the tap or bottled water dependent on their need and financial ability. Governments, of course, should ensure that everyone can access to the clean water, but not completely ban the sale bottled water. There are many alternative ways, such as: water-price control, strict condition to commercialize water resources, etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
People have different thoughts about whether or not governments should ban the sale of bott...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68942832055 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1228533899 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7142857143 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399074905347 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146945692603 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107023165174 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324646476445 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438682066102 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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