What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals technology has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analysis and explain whether they are boon or bane for our society. I will elaborate its pros and cons in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad merits of automation. The first and foremost, technology makes our easy in all ways because it has gifted us plenty of things which are very useful in our daily life. Probing further, it provides us remote lifestyle because these days every work is done in short time and in easiest ways. As a case in point, masses have opportunity to communicate with others in all around the world as compared to ancient time.
On the contrary, every rose has its own thorns so there are some cons of machinery work. Firstly, it births immense of ailments which are very harmful for individuals. To cite an example, majority of population around the globe are suffering plenty of diseases due to using of technology gadgets. Last but not least, it also became sedentary lifestyle. People always prefer to utilize their time on internet.
To conclude, I firmly believe that automation have crucial role in our life because of its advancement. People should use these gadgets in limit time because it will help them to away from maladies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the easiest'.
Suggestion: in the easiest
...ys every work is done in short time and in easiest ways. As a case in point, masses have o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, in short, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88259109312 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58574219752 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63967611336 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1905616405 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0470633021083 0.242375264174 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0137350587331 0.0925447433944 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02339420085 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258537405441 0.151781067708 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173601290071 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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