some people think that the development of technology help to decrease crime and other people think that would encourage crime to discuss both views and give your opinion
one of the highly controversial issues today relates to that of crime prevention. While some people believe that government should take the responsibility for crime prevention, some others think that every person should be responsible for their safety and defend themselves against crime. this essay discusses why self-protection is very important but why the role of government is more efficient in preventing crime.
Self-defense is certainly one of the most efficient ways to avoid crime. Mastering certain techniques like Kungfu, karate, Boxing can definitely help a common man protect himself and his family from criminals. For instance, in Japan, achieving a black belt in karate is mandatory for every student because people believe in making students independent. thus, students are made to undergo such training so that they are able to protect themselves from an unforeseen incidence of violence or crime. thus, it is easy to see why it is important to be independent and hold responsibility for preventing any criminal activity.
However, not everyone can be independent, and also, the intensity of crime can be quite high. In such situations, if government tightens the rules and ensures that the police department is proactive, definitely everyone fears the punishments and tends to stay away from crime. For example, a recent survey showed that the main reason for 0.2% crime rate in the USA is ridiculously strict rules and an intensely proactive criminal department. thus, it goes without saying that the government has a major responsibility in preventing crime.
reducing the crime rate is very important for creating a safe and peaceful environment in the country. this essay discussed why people should learn to be independent and acquire some self-defense techniques; nonetheless, the role of government is more important in reducing crime. In my opinion, the rules framed by the government are more efficient than self-defense in preventing crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43831168831 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06266941078 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529220779221 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1660698643 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212672245535 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735662962925 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531050860435 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143625571233 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625574748584 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.