Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Sequel to the universal availability of products to the people, the similarity amongst many nations is increasing. In this essay, I will use the 2019 United Nations (UN) report to analyse why this development is advantageous.
One of the reasons why it is beneficial for countries to become increasingly similar is because they tend to have quick universal solutions to the world's problems. As evidenced by the UN report, international commerce is a major contributing factor to the solutions of some of the pressing issues in the world. This is because, as manufacturers design some products for global consumption, they usually grow in comprehensive knowledge of the different issues of various nations. And the producers usually swiftly tackle these problems in order to boost sales. So, largely due to the similarities amongst countries through goods and services, there have been swift remedies to difficult situations.
Another significant impact of this development relates to unity. Owing to the growing connection amongst countries, the world is increasingly uniting in some areas such as, culture and food. Since the majority of the different people from different races and ethnicities now purchase each others' textiles and foods, as reported by the UN, people now view other cultures from a good perspective. As a result of this, many countries unite enthusiastically, and this seems to be an advantage.
In conclusion, after examining the above benefits, it is clear that not only are countries correcting several errors, but are also uniting through cultures. Therefore, I believe this is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43137254902 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12535980243 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5575836837 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170087132972 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598274232123 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415465738672 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990386531067 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132234836841 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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