A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.
A nation comprises of different states and provinces.there is one government centrally ruling the nation and a state government to rule the states. any rules and regulations sorted down by the central government should be abided by the citizens of a nation. this could be true for the academics also. In framing the curriculum, if the overall need is suited, then it could be adopted by the entire nation for a uniform course of study. but this form of homogeneity has its own advantages and disadvantages.
The advantage is that knowledge acquired by an individual and the subjects learnt by him/ her will be the same. so, throughout the nation, students may be judged based on the same examination and evaluation pattern. this could result in a non biased system of admission into a college anywhere within the nation. any kind of dissimilarities in the pattern of study could be avoided. it will be an added boon to the professors teaching a particular subject since they are prone to witness a group of students coming from the same academic background.
The most disadvantageous part is that, when students are most likely to move to other states for a better institution, a diversity in the curriculum would seem to be a major bane for them. The reason behind it is that, there is a possibility of a curriculum not following a particular topic which could have been the base for college level of studies. Similarly, a students knowledge level would be diverse based on whether they were in CBSE or state board or a matriculation. Best example could be the NEET exam conducted every year in india to gain admissions to medical college. since, in india, different states follow a different pattern of study, students from the southern part of india find it difficult to pass in the exam compared to their northern counterparts. Thus there arises a non homogeneity in the production of doctors in india.
The above examples arrive at the conclusion that the decision-making should be done at the central level looking at the requirements of the people of a nation. A curriculum must be framed keeping in mind the varied cultures, traditions and languages of the different states belonging to a nation. if this could be accomplished, then there would not be any objections from the citizens of a nation in following a practise for the betterment of the nation. Recently, india's prime minister announced that the language hindi to be made compulsory as the first language of the people of india. there were many states not compliant to the above said decision. To run a smooth government and for the people of a nation to converse in their national language, making hindi as mandatory is a well thought off idea. but asking the citizens to learn is as a first language could only create chaos, disturbance and oppositions arising. The reason behind it is, every state follow a different language and according to them, it their duty to safeguard their cherished values.
so, the decision lies in the hands of the government keeping in mind the needs and demands of the citizens of a nation.if the willingness is more, then the same curriculum could be introduced for the entire nation. Otherwise, it would only result in violence and non adherence of principles laid down for the people. so, until a student enters college, for his benefit and the benefit of his country, a well suited curriculum could be framed and put into action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, similarly, so, then, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2862.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 587.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87563884157 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87173047173 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456558773424 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 914.4 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0689807482 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7407407407 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7037037037 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253834044739 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711437816769 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558755382839 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152927404506 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341053365365 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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