You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is John Billy and I am a software engineer by profession. I live in Gurgaon and I usually travel to work by City bus service which is managed by your team. Yesterday, when I was returning from the office, I noticed that one of your bus driver used inappropriate language while talking to a passenger, who was a female senior citizen.
At first, when I heard that the woman was complaining about rough driving to driver and conductor, as driver was not driving the bus smoothly. The bus driver was angry with old lady, and suddenly he started shouting at her, which was opposed by fellow travelers. Moreover, they warned him to call the police and report this issue to your department, subsequently, he also used inappropriate words while talking to other people, who warned him.
As being a good human, I would like to report this issue further and I want authorities to take a strict action against him, so that, this kind of incidents would not happen again. I have a video clip of the entire incident which could be used as evidence. Finally, I want that an apology letter should be sent by your department to victim of this serious incident, who is very disappointed with this kind of behavior, which is not acceptable.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, look, moreover, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.03092783505 429% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73728813559 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67019092264 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1245884454 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218541249348 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830338847533 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632461395765 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119315899275 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693367856807 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.