Life was better when technology was simpler.To what extent do you agree and disagree?
It is debatable that our lives were most useful when technology was ordinary. This essay disagrees with this statement because latest technology lead us to treat patients with cure and saves our time.
When technology came into power, we are able to help our patients, so that they live their lives would be without pain and anxiety.For example there is a treatment of decaying tooth. Doctor can treat their patients with root canal process. This is less painful and there is no need to remove the decaying tooth. The infected tooth of nerves has to block. Before the technology there was no procedure for tooth which is infected by plague. Dentist had to take out the tooth at any cost. This creates severe pain and massive headache to sufferer. Sometimes, there may be a chances of any bacterial infection because of the empty space in teeth.
We can easily travel to any countries part of the world. We have to make a booking of our flight and follow the procedures is integral part of any country. The maximum time for reaching our destination is 3 days. Sometimes, if we are going to any city we can easily come back within hours. For Example, Aeroplane has changed our lives which is the most speedy way of reaching to countries . Before that people used to do their journey by ships or animals.
In conclusion, life has been upgraded through technology particularly by helping our patients with less pain and enjoying the benefits reaching rapidly to our destinations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82745098039 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51828942265 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3442793598 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4117647059 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10005139565 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319562026426 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542126438279 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709218166448 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496914429049 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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